Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. This is also a parody fanfiction that is based on Spongebob Squarepants' episode 'Hall Monitor,' The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron's episode 'Hall Monster,' Wayside's episode 'Safety Monitor,' it is also based on a chapter from Loud House Tales that was called 'Hall Monitor,' however that is no longer up for some reason, and Lynn Loud Jr. being a hall monitor in the Loud House season 5 episode 'Schooled!' (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). Well just grin and bear it. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. You took it too far! Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Except for Lynn). "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! Lucy: So, that's it then? I pull off one little trick and you guys all flip out over some nonsense like a bunch of gullible buffoons! Everyone finally realized that what they've done. 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Give it back! Especially Lynn. Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. (Family begins to come around. Especially Miss. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. Some sisters those ghouls are. Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! And after that, the whole room was silent. Yes." Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. ", Lincoln: "No. Completed Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. "Good riddance." Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. There's no need to shout. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. Rita: Honey! Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. But dont worry, youre still a great writer. They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. And I HATE LEECHES!" ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. "What do you kids want?" Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. ", (and that did it. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). "Is that so?" He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). You are about as braindead as you're heartless! We messed up too. "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. News flash; I live here!". ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." As they were trying to relax, stomping and shaking were heard, causing everyone in the spa to wonder what was going on. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. Im melting! Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." We don't need to get violent here. You're scaring even me. Did anything life threatening happen? That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." See if I care! This is a family moment. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. The important thing is that we learn from them. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. Luna. Lincoln: Okay. He flies over to her and onto her hand.) There's a massive storm heading your way." It's too broken, even for me! Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. The End. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! Kick the . Lucy: Lincoln, stop! [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Journal. All rights belong to Nickelodeon. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. [The softball playoffs. "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" That was my favourite bat! Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. (It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Didn't you say you would never kick us out? ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. We got your back. Lock 'n' Loud / The Whole Picture. Slow down Lynn! He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." My team needs that! ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! Fortunately, there was no earthquake. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. I hate gator wrestling! I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! Honey, we're back. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! Lincoln: I don't believe it! Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" What kind of family would do this to one of their own? I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! Lola: Me too! It was against the law. Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. The heat increases. "Hotel security came up to the room?!" "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. Lori said. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. Rita: Kids, your friends are here. He's just really mad, isn't he? I have failed as a human being. (They arrive home. I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! Brawl in the family alt ending8. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. You overreact to everything! Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? "Same here." Not a loud alt ending6. *, Lincoln: It's not fair. Bad. "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". Ever again. They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. Trivia. (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. I hate concerts! She smiled as Lincoln took it. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" "Wait, what are you saying?" "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lincoln: I said NO! Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. But seriously, we made a mess of everything! Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! DeviantArt Protect. "Aren't you guys going to help us?" An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". Plot. "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? Lana said, glaring at her parents. It's my first ever one shot I've done. Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. Let me tell you this! I hate that you never listen to reason! If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! She playfully rolled her eyes. I tried to make it as comical as i could. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. Sweaty Pants here! (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. (They keep searching the house. NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" You all are really, really bad luck! Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Also yes, this story takes place in season 5. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. Honest! Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." Suite and Sour / Back in Black. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. SEE YOU NEVER!" Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Lincoln: No! (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! Lynn: FINE! You try dancing in this heat! We had no idea this family could be so gullible. Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending Add to Favourites By HaileyKittydoesart Published: Mar 31, 2021 Favourites Comment 4K Views "I'm not bad luck!" Lincoln said in a megaphone, he was done with sleeping outside and eating acorns to survive. (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. I hate presentations! Goodbye for now. I am bad luck! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." I even threatened you to go to my game! "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! Spell it out alt ending7. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" Lincoln: I hate this! Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! kamenrider. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy."